I am new at this and would like some feed back on the webpages for the eBook I am doing. any and all input is appreciated. This is my first ebook. site is at
griefwheel.com
Thanks Elbert Dee Walston
Posted on: 11:25 pm on March 4, 2003
EBookCompiler
The page looks good, although I'm not 100% sure about the background color.
I think more spacing (a blank line between paragraphs etc) or sub-headings or the about me in a side box could make the text easier to read.
I think it would be good to tell a bit more about the book, as it has enough to make you curious, but not quite enough for me to be really curious
Also make the payment link REALLY obvious, maybe a text version at the bottom of the page. I'd open the Overview (Preview?) in a new window too, as otherwise I have to remember to hit back.
Check the text carefully. I don't think "Well" should be there, some caps not sure about, "lose" vs "loose".
I think about me section needs a little more work - like I see your pic and why you charge, but it doesn't realy say much on _about me_.
Also, I would explain it's an E-Book to read on your computer. Needs Windows etc.
Posted on: 4:04 am on March 5, 2003
elbertdee
Thanks for the feed back. I obviously did not make the more about me obvious enough, there is another page with more about me. Ill work on changing that around. Was trying not to have to much scrolling down. Again Thanks very much for the input.
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